A Mini Adventure

These WERE meant to be the final storyboards... but ended up too sketchy to be so. I'm currently working on my animatic as I speak, which will serve as both a storyboard and animation test for this project. I will show how the story will play out usuing these draft sketches; and hopefully the animatic should be complete soon enough to replace them.

1. Overview of the city. Fire and smoke overhailing; and ships scanning the area.
2. Overview cut off by character, following him.
3. Character walks into an alleyway.
4. Character caught by guards chasing another civilian.

1. Primary Character flees, other gets shot.

2. Primary Character hits a dustbin, knocks out someone hiding.

3. Following Dustbin character, Primary Character gets shot.

4. Character flees the opposite direction; terror shown in the background as other "trash" characters get rounded up via camps.

1. Top view of following character running towards a broken bridge.

2. Shot cut off by an airship. Shows drivers

3. Airship patrols over a street brawl with the unknown "gas" characters. Other civilians shown fleeing.

4. Airship rises higher; passing more chaos shown in the background building.

1. "Dustbin" character from earlier shown on a building rooftop.

2. The Dustbin Character jumps onto another following roof. Airship detects.

3. Face shot of the character escaping the airship, scared facial expression.

4. Airship fires; face of pain shown. White flash ends story.

Yeah...

After reading my horrible English, the biggest problem is the name of the characters. A lot of the story is contained in the chaos in the environment; but the characters are what makes the story move to place to place. I have got named picked for every main character shown; but that would be just as confusing as the nicknames used. Despite what I wrote, there is no main character. it's just one after another which show the viewer the situation of this story.

It might be easier once the animatic is done, expect a preview... soon?